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Divided Resonance by Flurrin Divided Resonance by Flurrin
I CANNOT WITH MY BROT3 FOR LIFE

Okay, anyone remember this? Clearly I've improved a bit since then but also June (Maka's mum) has gone through some more development and she is cool and I need to write about these three
Also, this takes place like...a year or two before that other picture. Stein doesn't have the scruffies yet.
EDIT: gave Franken (surgical c8) gloves and fixed a few color bleeds. And the shadows.

CRITIQUES DESIRED. I am so bad at cell shading, it's painful for me. But like anything else you see that's problematic, do point it out, please!
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SpeedyAlchemist Feb 20, 2014  Student Writer
Absolutely love the shading on this. ^__^
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Flurrin Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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OtakuYasha Feb 19, 2014  Student Artist
This is really good! The way Spirit glows is just like the anime, and I applaud you. The positions and general anatomy are also really well done as well. The shading is really good, since you have redding lighting. Not many people think of that. 

I only have two complaints (and they're really only more of a nitpick, but you asked for a critique!)

A) (and this is really tiny) You only have one half of June's face/hair shaded pink, and it's the side facing away (Her right side). Since her left side is the closest to Spirit's glow, it would make more sense that that side of her face would have a stronger reflection of the light. But that is a major nitpick, though I believe it will add a bit of realism to your artwork.

B) (and this is kinda hard to fix, sorry) It's my personal opinion that Stein's coat wouldn't stay on his shoulders like that. Maybe that's your idea, but just so you know, it kinda destroys the realism you have with this art. Since everything else is so good, it kinda stands out.

Keep in mind these are all just my opinion, so take it all with a grain of salt, and change what you want, no more, no less! And continue the good work!
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Flurrin Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my gosh thank you so much for taking the time to critique! I rarely never get critiques and this comment made me really happy :iconyuihugplz:

Thank you for the suggestion! I actually know what's causing that so I will check back and fix it sometime, maybe reupload the deviation if I get the motivation xD

Yeah, it probably wouldn't xD The wrinkles are all wrong, too. I'd just been drawing labcoats all day and I was bored of them, but it actually wouldn't be too much of an issue for me to redraw it.

Thank you so much!
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OtakuYasha Feb 20, 2014  Student Artist
Yeah, I understand. Most comments are like, "Cool! This is neat!", which... does... nothing to help. I'm glad you enjoy it!

I'm glad it was useful!
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Flurrin Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Exactly! I love them, but...ahh!! I need help xD
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:iconmutantdbzfan:
Nice. Better than I could do.
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Flurrin Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Literally never say that, ever.
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:iconmutantdbzfan:
I personally can't draw, so I admire people like you who can.
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