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Guess who wrote a screenplay in 2 days?

  Okay, so, a while back, I walked in on my cousin and his friend laughing loudly as they read dramatically from about 25 pages of a script. Apparently one of their friends was directing a short film, but the person who had written the script had demanded it be a love story, so the script she churned out was...less than stellar. My cousin offered to "fix it up a bit" so we took a copy home.
  The story was by no means unsalvageable. There was a clear source of suspense throughout, a good number of characters without being crowded or too much to cast, and a great female lead character who was very active in the plot. However, the focus was on all of the wrong scenes, the dialogue was filled with narm (phrases like "the cat's meow" and "talkie" in a misguided attempt at 1920's slang), and there were too many scenes and too high of a production value (like, the script called for at least 20 original paintings, some being showed created, by the actress, on camera). Also some of the scenes just made no sense (it started with the lead penning a letter to someone who had died, whose funeral was taking place a year after his death...?) It needed an intense rewrite. And my cousin, who was excited about the project at first, realized quickly he was too busy to help with it.
  So I took it on. I spent the first day researching the era and just picking up the details I would need (knowing the story helped know where to look), and then I started that night and finished the next night.
  So my cousin emailed the new script back to his friend, and guess what? As soon as the director read it, she decided to reshoot everything.

I can't post the script on here, but I'm really proud of it, and it's a positive story, so I wanted to share. =) The working title is The Painter's Daughter. When the film is finished, I'll see if I can get you guys the link!
  • Mood: Pride
  • Listening to: Sara Barielles
  • Reading: a book on screenwriting
  • Watching: marathoning chick flicks with my female cousins
  • Playing: Wind Waker

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Flurrin
Flurrin Kafei
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Give a llama, get a llama!

Demisexual Christian giving back in art what God gives me in love. I love talking about fandoms and I'm a giant nerd, please use whatever excuse you have to talk to me. If you want to know more about me just ask!
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Saurel Redo by Flurrin
Saurel Redo
Both designed simply for animation purposes. (Am I redoing it? That depends. Am I dumb enough to give myself another project on top of all the requests and work I'm supposed to be doing? You betcha I am.)

3 years of improvement, and I think it does actually show pretty well. Just a better comprehension of facial anatomy. Any critiques for the new one are welcome. (I didn't forget her pupils, I like leaving them out on purpose.)

Look how cute!!!! my daughter is!!!! i love her!!!!!!!! MUST BE PROTECTED AT ALL COSTS

DoInk, I miss you, baby, please take me back
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:iconbengtzone:
Bengtzone Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
Are you familiar with Dark Deco animation?
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Flurrin Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No
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Bengtzone Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
The original variation of the TimmStyle art design was well known for it.
Watch Batman: The Animated Series Episode 1 Online
Here's a few other shows, that utilized a variation of the art design:
Watch Gargoyles Episode 1 Online
Watch Mortal Kombat Defenders of the Realm Episode 1 Online
Watch The Big O Episode 1 Online
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Flurrin Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've seen all of those except Mortal Kombat but I still have no clue what you're referring to.
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northstar2x Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Flurrin my dear,
You are an amazing artist
I'm in love with your gallery *0*
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Flurrin Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Eeee! Thank you very much for the Watch!! And the comment :heart:
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northstar2x Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :D

There's so much feels in all your work
I just love it
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Flurrin Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!! I strive for feels eeeheehee
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fingerpaint888 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
Thanks for the llama :)
and feel free to check out the contest
fingerpaint888.deviantart.com/…
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Shava-Wayward Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the favs!
:glomp: remake 
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